Poem:Betrayal

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    Post  King vxx on Thu May 28, 2009 12:15 pm

    This is my first poem.So it's gonna be bad but idc lol.Here goes something.

    The truth is out,
    It caught me by surprise,
    I realized that i was wrong,
    And now i only feel,
    Betrayal,
    Betrayal,
    Betrayal.

    Love is a monster,
    They'll make you happy,
    But don't be fooled,
    Eventually you'll get,
    Betrayal,
    Betrayal,
    Betrayal.

    She is a demon,
    The kind that hurt people's feeling,
    Strangely I don't feel anger or sad,
    But this terrible feeling is,
    Betrayal,
    Betrayal,
    Betrayal.

    What did i do to deserve this?
    All those years of pure love are wasted,
    This is a story of a heartbroken man,
    Who feels nothing but,
    Betrayal,
    Betrayal,
    Betrayal.


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    Post  suparman3614 on Thu May 28, 2009 12:45 pm

    dude ummm thats awesome for ur first 1 lol Very Happy
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    Post  vonrichdofen on Thu Jun 04, 2009 12:07 pm

    very nice man i like it! cheers
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    Post  Downesy on Sun Jun 07, 2009 6:13 pm

    well done mate nice very nice cheers

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